Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Beware of the Haunted House on the Hill!

One day, a girl named Victoria invited her friends. Howie, Lucy, Jack, Eric, Melody and Clara. She said that they were going to the haunted house on the hill. They all were scared. Victoria said, “Are you guys scardy cats?” Even she was scared.
So they went to the haunted house. They knocked on the door. No answer. No one was at home. The door was open so they went in.
Next thing they heard screeching noises. They were frightened. Then suddenly they fell into a trap. There was another hallway down there. They found stairs. They climbed the stairs. It led back up. They found a window dripping with blood. They saw rain. Jack and Eric said, “Aw, we won’t be able to leave this creepy place.”
It was Halloween night. They were trapped. They found a sign saying “Blood Pool”. Eric, Jack and Howie said, “Let’s go swimming in the pool.” Melody said, “But it’s a blood pool!” Victoria calmed them down. “Let’s see if the water is blue. If it is, then we’ll go swimming.”
They went inside. It was blue. They went swimming. Melody and Clara stayed outside. They thought red blood was below the clear, pure, blue water.
Howie, Lucy, Jack, Eric and Victoria drowned. Victoria held onto the gutter. She helped everyone. Eric said, “Wow! That was like a whirlpool!” They went into the hall again.
Eric said, “Look I found the kitchen.” Jack was about to eat a hamburger when Lucy screamed, “Wait! It might be bloody and poisonous!” Jack took it away from his lips. He said, “Phew!” He thanked Lucy. She said, “You’re welcome!”
They went to the hallway again. They found a sign. It said “Graveyard.” They went inside. They saw Rest-In-Peace signs everywhere. Eric touched one of them.
They heard a noise. Then in the flash of an eye, there were zombies and mummies everywhere chasing them. They ran for their lives. Suddenly the zombies and the mummies were gone. They all were frightened.
They ran out of the haunted house and didn’t stop until they reached Victoria’s house. They all got inside. They warmed up with hot cocoa. They were shivering. They didn’t want to see that haunted house ever again.


THE END……

5 comments:

Girl of Destiny said...

good story Indus!
shivers running up and down my spine!
:-)

Malli said...
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indus said...

Thank you girl of destiny! I haven't written a really scary story! I hope you keep on sending comments.

N Gautham said...

Dear Sindhu,

I read your stories today, and I think they are great! I am looking forward to reading more and more stories from you. Maybe ou can try to write a mystery story next.

Gautham maama

Kelly Toon said...

full of surprises and suspense. Funny, too!